Need help with Mobile App Store Description

[mknutson]

I am just about to submit the new BLiNC Magazine iPhone and Android apps to the various stores and want some help to get a detailed and descriptive submission text. So please help me to alter the following:

With BASEJumping.tv Mobile for BLiNC Magazine, you can access the community of the "MOST DANGEROUS SPORT ON THE PLANET" directly from your Android device.

- Send and receive PM's
- Access and post to the most recent discussions
- Read and post to BASEJumping blogs and articles
- View BASE Jumping profiles
- Customize your mobile account anywhere, anytime

Wingsuit basejumping, BASE jumping and base jump fatality is involving the use of a parachute or the sequenced use of a wingsuit and parachute to jump from fixed objects -- BASE is an acronym for Building, antennae, span (Bridge), and Earth and thus represents the fixed-objects from which BASE jumps are made. Everything you ever wanted to know about base-jumping, but didn't know whom to ask.

Thanks for your help!

[mknutson]

In case anyone wants a preview of the mobile app, here are the screen shots for the Android version

[mknutson]

And I might as well show you the iPhone screen shots too right ;-)

[mknutson]

And this is the first android post from the new app...

[MarcoPoko]

Nice work Mick!